Cand A - eaa: 19 uoe: 20uot: 7 = 46
Cand B - eaa: 17 uoe: 20 uot: 6 = 43

I thought that both of the exam responses were very good yet different but both in good ways. I would say that Candidate A was slighly better at describing how gender in television is generally portrayed and i could always understand where he/she was coming from and what they were talking about, but on the other hand I also believe that Candidate B showed how this reflected in the characters a little more. I also found Candidate A's peice of work was far clearer to understand and relate to, whereas Candidate B went into a little too much detail at some points without relating back to what the question was asking for and could have used a little more terminology and examples describing mise en scene and other factors. Overall i though that Candidate A portrayed his'her ideas more clearly and seemed to relate back to the question more and understand what they was doing.